script Buy Gun

[LuK3Z 3]

Zdravím. Můj první FS.

http://pastebin.com/Tn6JAYvD

 

Můžete i kritiku !

[Guest Vock0]

napiš více info o tom ...

[LuK3Z 3]

Jsou tam zbraně:

Deagle, Pistol, Granades, MP5, AK74, M4, Combat Shotgun, Rifle, Armor, Sawnoff Shotgun,

RPG

 

Kdyz dáte /gun objeví se vám tam co chcete koupit

[KarTooN 1]

Měl si tam dát i cenu zbraní...

[Guest]

Unkown paste ID!

[LuK3Z 3]

Tu to máte

 

//-------------------------------Include--------------------------------------//

#include

//-------------------------------Include--------------------------------------//

//----------------------------------Barvy-------------------------------------//

#define COLOR_RED 0xAA3333AA

//----------------------------------Barvy-------------------------------------//

new guns;

#if defined FILTERSCRIPT

 

public OnFilterScriptInit()

{

guns = CreateMenu("Buy a gun.", 1, 50.0, 180.0, 200.0, 200.0);

 

AddMenuItem(guns, 0, "Deagle");

AddMenuItem(guns, 0, "pistol");

AddMenuItem(guns, 0, "Pistol");

AddMenuItem(guns, 0, "Grenades");

AddMenuItem(guns, 0, "MP5");

AddMenuItem(guns, 0, "AK47");

AddMenuItem(guns, 0, "M4");

AddMenuItem(guns, 0, "Combat Shotgun");

AddMenuItem(guns, 0, "Rifle");

AddMenuItem(guns, 0, "Armor");

AddMenuItem(guns, 0, "Uzi");

AddMenuItem(guns, 0, "Sawnoff Shotgun");

AddMenuItem(guns, 0, "RPG");

return 1;

}

 

public OnFilterScriptExit()

{

return 1;

}

 

#else

 

#endif

 

 

 

public OnPlayerCommandText(playerid, cmdtext[])

{

 

{

if(strcmp(cmdtext, "/gun", true) == 0)

{

ShowMenuForPlayer(playerid, guns);

}

return 1;

}

}

 

 

public OnPlayerSelectedMenuRow(playerid, row)

{

new Menu:current;

current = GetPlayerMenu(playerid);

if(current == guns)

{

switch(row)

{

case 0:

{

 

GivePlayerWeapon(playerid, 24, 50);

GivePlayerMoney(playerid, GetPlayerMoney(playerid)-5000);

SendClientMessage(playerid, COLOR_RED, "Zbran koupena");

}

case 1:

{

 

GivePlayerWeapon(playerid, 23, 50);

GivePlayerMoney(playerid, GetPlayerMoney(playerid)-5000);

SendClientMessage(playerid, COLOR_RED, "Zbran koupena");

}

case 2:

{

 

GivePlayerWeapon(playerid, 22, 50);

GivePlayerMoney(playerid, GetPlayerMoney(playerid)-5000);

SendClientMessage(playerid, COLOR_RED, "Zbran koupena");

}

case 3:

{

 

GivePlayerWeapon(playerid, 16, 4);

GivePlayerMoney(playerid, GetPlayerMoney(playerid)-2000);

SendClientMessage(playerid, COLOR_RED, "Zbran koupena");

}

case 4:

{

 

GivePlayerWeapon(playerid, 29, 500);

GivePlayerMoney(playerid, GetPlayerMoney(playerid)-10000);

SendClientMessage(playerid, COLOR_RED, "Zbran koupena");

}

case 5:

{

 

GivePlayerWeapon(playerid, 30, 500);

GivePlayerMoney(playerid, GetPlayerMoney(playerid)-10000);

SendClientMessage(playerid, COLOR_RED, "Zbran koupena");

}

case 6:

{

 

GivePlayerWeapon(playerid, 30, 500);

GivePlayerMoney(playerid, GetPlayerMoney(playerid)-10000);

SendClientMessage(playerid, COLOR_RED, "Zbran koupena");

}

case 7:

{

 

GivePlayerWeapon(playerid, 27, 500);

GivePlayerMoney(playerid, GetPlayerMoney(playerid)-10000);

SendClientMessage(playerid, COLOR_RED, "Zbran koupena");

}

case 8:

{

 

GivePlayerWeapon(playerid, 33, 500);

GivePlayerMoney(playerid, GetPlayerMoney(playerid)-10000);

SendClientMessage(playerid, COLOR_RED, "Zbran koupena");

}

case 9:

{

SetPlayerArmour(playerid, 100);

GivePlayerMoney(playerid, GetPlayerMoney(playerid)-5000);

SendClientMessage(playerid, COLOR_RED, "Armor koupena!");

}

case 10:

{

GivePlayerWeapon(playerid, 28, 500);

GivePlayerMoney(playerid, GetPlayerMoney(playerid)-8000);

SendClientMessage(playerid, COLOR_RED, "Zbran koupena");

}

case 11:

{

GivePlayerWeapon(playerid, 26, 500);

GivePlayerMoney(playerid, GetPlayerMoney(playerid)-11000);

SendClientMessage(playerid, COLOR_RED, "Zbran koupena");

}

case 12:

{

GivePlayerWeapon(playerid, 35, 500);

GivePlayerMoney(playerid, GetPlayerMoney(playerid)-15000);

SendClientMessage(playerid, COLOR_RED, "Zbran koupena");

}

}

}

return 1;

}

 

[Sweet 7]

na prvni praci je to pekny ale par veci bych ti k tomu rekl...

1. pouzivej radsi dialogy, menu je uz zastarale a moc lidi ho nepouziva

2. u ty funkce GivePlayerMoney stacilo dat -5000 nemusel si zjistovat kolik penez hrac ma

3. neni tam podminka, jestli ty penize ma

a nakonec bych ti chtel podotknout takovyhle veci si nechavej pro sebe, my tu na to nejsme zvedavy, protoze to sem dava kazdej 2. novacek na foru... radsi se stale uc pawn a zkus vytvorit nejakej originalni FS kterej jeste nikdo jiny nevytvoril a prekvap nas vsechny, urcite budes mit 10x lepsi hodnoceni